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Type
of Work and Year Written
.......Thomas
Hood's "The Song of the Shirt" is a protest poem centering on the inhumane
working conditions and meager pay of London's lower-class workers. Punch
magazine published it in its 1843 Christmas issue. Since then, numerous
collections and anthologies have published the poem.
Source
.......Hood
based his poem on a real incident involving a London widow who sewed men's
garments in her home from materials provided by her employer. She worked
long hours but received a meager wage of seven shillings a week. On one
occasion, she pawned the employer's sewing materials so she could buy food
for her starving children. A London police court charged her with a crime.
Theme
and Summary
.......The
theme of the poem is the unjust treatment of laborers by niggardly employers.
Hood develops this theme by focusing on an overworked woman who sews men's
shirts and pants. She is the poem's speaker.
.......The
long hours and tedium of her job wear her down physically, and the poor
pay forces her to wear rags, live in squalor, and go hungry. While working
her threaded needle
up and down, she sings a "song of the shirt" as a complaint about her plight.
.......In
her song, she says she must work from sunup ("while the cock is crowing,"
line 10) until nightfall ("till the stars shine through the roof," line
12). She is no more than a slave. She works so hard, she says, that she
falls asleep over her work but continues it in a dream.
.......The
speaker then appeals to men, telling them that wearing out the shirts and
trousers she makes also wears out the lives of the women who sew them.
In other words, while sewing shirts and pants, these women are also sewing
their own shrouds. But, the speaker says, she little fears death; for she
herself—gaunt, deprived of food—is the very figure of death.
.......And
what does she get for all her work? Only a crust of bread, ragged clothing,
and a ramshackle house with shabby furnishings.
.......Throughout
the year, she sits at her sewing—like a prisoner in a workhouse—and yearns
in the spring to go outside for a single hour to breathe the fragrant air.
She has no time for love or hope, but only time for grief. So on and on
she sews, and on and on she sings the song of the shirt.
Text of the Poem
With fingers weary and
worn,
With eyelids heavy
and red,
A woman sat, in unwomanly
rags,
Plying her needle and
thread—
Stitch! stitch! stitch!
In poverty, hunger,
and dirt,
And still with a voice
of dolorous pitch
She sang the "Song
of the Shirt."
"Work! work! work!
While the cock is crowing
aloof!..........................10
And work—work—work,
Till the stars shine
through the roof!
It's Oh! to be a slave
Along with the barbarous
Turk,
Where woman has never
a soul to save,
If this is Christian
work!
"Work— work—work,
Till the brain begins
to swim;
Work—work—work,
Till the eyes are heavy
and dim!
Seam, and gusset,
* and band,............................20
Band, and gusset, and
seam,
Till over the buttons
I fall asleep,
And sew them on in
a dream!
"Oh, Men, with Sisters
dear!
Oh, men, with Mothers
and Wives!
It is not linen you're
wearing out,
But human creatures'
lives!
Stitch—stitch—stitch,
In poverty, hunger
and dirt,...................................30
Sewing at once, with
a double thread,
A Shroud
as well as a Shirt.
"But why do I talk of
Death?
That Phantom of grisly
bone,
I hardly fear its terrible
shape,
It seems so like my
own—
It seems so like my
own,
Because of the fasts
I keep;
Oh, God! that bread
should be so dear
And flesh and blood
so cheap!..............................40
"Work—work—work!
My labour never flags;
And what are its wages?
A bed of straw,
A crust of bread—and
rags.
That shattered roof—this
naked floor—
A table—a broken chair—
And a wall so blank,
my shadow I thank
For sometimes falling
there!
"Work—work—work!
From weary chime to
chime,.................................50
Work—work—work,
As prisoners work for
crime!
Band, and gusset, and
seam,
Seam, and gusset, and
band,
Till the heart is sick,
and the brain benumbed,
As well as the weary
hand.
"Work—work—work,
In the dull December
light,
And work—work—work,
When the weather is
warm and bright—..................60
While underneath the
eaves
The brooding swallows
cling
As if to show me their
sunny backs
And twit me with the
spring.
"Oh! but to breathe
the breath
Of the cowslip
and primrose sweet—
With the sky above
my head,
And the grass beneath
my feet;
For only one short
hour
To feel as I used to
feel,..........................................70
Before I knew the woes
of want
And the walk that costs
a meal!
"Oh! but for one short
hour!
A respite however brief!
No blessed leisure
for Love or Hope,
But only time for Grief!
A little weeping would
ease my heart,
But in their briny
bed
My tears must stop,
for every drop
Hinders needle and
thread!".....................................80
With fingers weary and
worn,
With eyelids heavy
and red,
A woman sat in unwomanly
rags,
Plying her needle and
thread—
Stitch! stitch! stitch!
In poverty, hunger,
and dirt,
And still with a voice
of dolorous pitch,—
Would that its tone
could reach the Rich!—
She sang this "Song
of the Shirt!"
Notes
barbarous Turk: The
speaker considers the Turks barbarous because they are not Christians.
gusset: Cloth sewn
into a garment or glove to make it stronger or wider.
Shroud: Burial cloth;
sheet that wraps a corpse.
cowslip and primrose:
Flowers.
ring: Ring-shaped
gathering place in London's Hyde Park or Regency Park. People would meet
there to socialize or exchange news.
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Tone
.......The
tone of the poem is despairing—or, as line 87 suggests, dolorous.
End
Rhyme
.......Alternating
lines of end rhyme occur in all the stanzas. But all the stanzas except
the second contain two to four unrhyming lines. Here are examples.
Stanza 1
With fingers weary and
worn,
With eyelids heavy
and red,
A woman sat, in unwomanly
rags,
Plying her needle and
thread
—
Stitch! stitch! stitch!
In poverty, hunger,
and dirt,
And still with a voice
of dolorous pitch
She sang the "Song
of the Shirt."
Stanza 8
"Work — work — work,
In the dull December
light,
And work — work — work,
When the weather is
warm and bright — 60
While underneath the
eaves
The brooding swallows
cling
As if to show me their
sunny backs
And twit me with the
spring.
Stanza 10
"Oh! but for one short
hour!
A respite however brief!
No blessed leisure
for Love or Hope,
But only time for Grief!
A little weeping would
ease my heart,
But in their briny
bed
My tears must stop,
for every drop
Hinders needle and
thread!"
80
Internal
Rhyme
.......The
poem also contains rhymes within the lines of verse. Here are examples.
And a wall
so blank, my shadow I thank
(line 47)
While underneath
the eaves (line 61)
And the grass beneath
my feet (line 68)
A little weeping
would ease my heart (line 77)
Would
that its tone could reach the Rich!
(line 88)
Verse
Format
.......The
poem consists mainly of iambs
and anapests in lines of varying
lengths. Following are the metric formats of the first three lines.
.....1..................2.....................
3
....iamb..................iamb......................anapest
With FING..|..ers
WEAR..|..y
and WORN.........................................(trimeter)
......1...............2.................
3
.....iamb...............iamb................anapest
With EYE..|..lids
HEA..|..vy
and RED.................................................(trimeter)
......1...............2.............
3..................
4
.....iamb...............iamb...........anapest...............anapest
A WOM..|..an
SAT..|..in
un WOM..|..an
ly RAGS...............................(tetrameter)
Alliteration
.......Alliteration
is the repetition of a consonant sound. It occurs frequently in the poem
to enhance its appeal to the ear.
With
fingers weary and worn
(line 1)
A woman
sat, in unwomanly rags (line 3)
She
sang
the "Song of the Shirt."
(line 8)
While the cock
is crowing aloof! (line 10)
"Oh! but
to breathe the breath
(line 65)
In the dull
December
light
Anaphora
.......Anaphora
is the repetition of a word or group of words at the beginning of a phrase,
clause, or sentence. Anaphora occurs throughout "November" with the repetition
of no at the beginning of each line, as well as within some lines.
With
fingers weary and worn,
With
eyelids heavy and red (lines 1-2)
No
dawn—no
dusk—no
proper time of day— (line 3)
No
shade,
no
shine,
no
butterflies,
no
bees
(line 22)
"Oh,
Men, with Sisters dear!
Oh,
men, with Mothers and Wives! (lines 24-24)
Metaphor
.......A
metaphor is a comparison between unlike things without the use of as,
like,
or than. Here are examples.
"But why do
I talk of Death?
That Phantom of grisly
bone (lines 33-34)
Comparison of death to
a phantom
"Work—work—work!
My labour never flags;
And what are its wages?
A bed of straw,
A crust of bread—and rags.
That shattered roof—this
naked floor—
A table—a broken chair—
And a wall so blank, my
shadow I thank (lines 41-47)
Comparison of a wages
to a bed, bread, roof, etc.
Paradox
.......A
paradox is a contradictory statement that contains truth.
"But why do
I talk of Death?
That Phantom of grisly
bone (lines 33-34)
A phantom is an apparition
or a vision. Thus, it has no bones. However, in the form of a corpse, death
contains bones.
Conclusion:
A Plea
.......In
the last stanza, the speaker expresses a plea for help from the wealthy
citizens of London—some of whom, ironically, are the very ones who oppress
her. This plea appears in line 88.
And still with
a voice of dolorous pitch,—
Would that its tone
could reach the Rich!—
She sang this "Song
of the Shirt!" (lines 87-89)
Study
Questions and Writing Topics
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Write
a short protest poem on a subject of your choice.
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Write
an essay centering on the wages and working conditions of London laborers
in the mid-nineteenth century.
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List additional
examples of alliteration besides those mentioned above.
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What is
the meaning of the following words in the poem: plying, dolorous,
brooding, twit, and grisly.
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