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Type
of Work and Year of Publication
.......Emily
Dickinson's "Success Is Counted Sweetest" is a three-stanza lyric
poem written in 1859. Author Helen Hunt Jackson, with whom Dickinson
corresponded, published the poem in 1878 in a collection, A Masque of
Poets.
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Success
Is Counted Sweetest
By
Emily Dickinson
1
Success
is counted
sweetest
By
those who ne'er succeed.
To comprehend a nectar
Requires
sorest
need.
Comments, Stanza 1
This stanza establishes the
theme: that the person who best understands the meaning of success is the
person who fails. This quatrain can stand alone as a completed observation.
nectar:
In Greek mythology, nectar was the drink of the gods, conferring on them
immortality. In common usage, a nectar is any delectable drink or, figuratively,
any uplifting experience.
2
Not
one of all the purple Host
Who
took
the Flag today
Can
tell
the definition
So
clear of Victory
Comments, Stanza 2
This stanza introduces military
imagery: purple Host (army) and took the Flag (captured the
flag, signifying victory), but it cannot stand alone as a completed observation.
Rather, it requires the third stanza to complete its meaning.
purple:
(1) Bloodstained; (2) purple attire, emblematic of high rank
3
As
he
defeated—dying—
On
whose forbidden ear
The
distant
strain of triumph
Burst
agonized and clear.
Comments, Stanza 3
The third stanza completes
the second, saying that a defeated soldier, dying, fully comprehends the
meaning of victory when he hears the enemy celebrating.
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Point
of View and Tone
.......The
poem uses third-person point of view, in which the speaker (narrator) observes
a battle and concludes that only the defeated warrior, hearing the enemy's
noisy victory celebration, completely understands success. The tone is
unemotional and impersonal; the speaker is reporting and interpreting what
she sees but refrains from expressing sympathy or compassion.
Themes
Only failures fully understand
the meaning of success. Dickinson announces this theme in the first
two lines: "Success is counted sweetest / By those who ne'er succeed."
Appreciating a boon requires
privation. For example, a poor man who wins the lottery better appreciates
his windfall than a millionaire executive who receives a six-figure bonus.
The poet enunciates this theme when she says, "To comprehend a nectar /
Requires sorest need."
Meter
.......The
meter consists of iambic trimeter and
iambic tetrameter. Some of the lines contain
a catalectic (incomplete) foot. Here is how
the first five lines appear when broken into metric feet.
.......1..................2...................3............4
(incomplete foot)
Suc CESS..|..is
COUNT..|..ed
SWEET..|..est......................................................iambic
tetrameter
.......1..................2...................3...........
By THOSE..|..who
NE'ER..|..suc
CEED...............................................................iambic
trimeter
......1................2...............3.........4
(incomplete foot)
To COM..|..pre
HEND..|..a
NEC..|..tar..................................................................iambic
tetrameter
.....1..............2...............3...........
Re QUI..|..res.SOR.|..est
NEED....Note:
"Requires" is pronounced as three syllables..............iambic
trimeter
......1..............2..............3..............4
Not ONE..|..of
ALL..|..the
PUR..|..ple
Host...........................................................iambic
tetrameter
Rhyme
Scheme
.......The
rhyme scheme is abcb—that is, in each stanza
the last syllable of the second line rhymes with the last syllable of the
fourth line.
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Figures of Speech
.......Paradox
is the controlling figure of speech in the poem. It expresses the main
theme: The person best qualified to evaluate the impact of success is the
vanquished rather than the triumphant. Implicit in this paradoxical observation
is that it can apply to anyone: the failed author, the defeated boxer,
the election loser, the rejected job applicant, the bankrupt businessman.
.......Following
are examples of figures of speech in the poem. For definitions of figures
of speech, see Literary Terms.
Alliteration
Success
is counted
sweetest
(line 1)
Not one of all the purple.Host
Who
took
the Flag today (lines 5-6)
As he
defeated—dying—
(line 9)
Paradox
Success
is counted
sweetest
By
those who ne'er succeed. (lines 1-2)
Syncope
Ne'er
(line 2) is an example of syncope (SINK uh pe), the omission of letters
from the middle of a word.
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Study Questions and Essay
Topics
1. Write a short account
about an incident from your own life that demonstrated the truth of "To
comprehend a nectar / Requires sorest need."
2. Is it possible to fail
in victory and succeed in defeat?
3. People measure success
by the money they make, the power they wield, the admiration they receive,
the satisfaction they derive from performing a task, and so on. Write an
essay that explains your definition of success. Use plenty of examples
to make your point.
4. Comment on the effect
of the word distant in the last stanza.
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